Geoff Dupuy-Holder - Screenwriter
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Joseph DiFrancesco – Screenwriter posted an update 5 years, 1 month ago
@geoffd Hi, Geoff.
Just re-read your original synopsis followed by the revised version. Clearly had to bump up the age of the child in order to make it work. Struggled with that myself. Still like the many clocks in your story; the crossing of the bay, the perceived radioactivity issue. All very impressive. (Sentient rising from the water…[Read more]