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@wavager Sent you a short review of the pilot on LinkedIn, David. Hope you enjoy this brief critique. Merry Christmas to you and all! View
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    David Steinhoff – Head of Development commented on the post, Sentient Australia Review – Draft Three 5 years, 3 months ago

    In reply to: David Steinhoff – Head of Development wrote a new post, Sentient Australia Review – Draft Three Begin your review Draft Three of Sentient – Australia – A 42 page Pilot script, is ready for review. Click on the […] View

    Some common review points:
    1. Readers are not comfortable with Dowd calling out for help.
    2. Readers like the Commodore as a woman and when I proposed she be Dowd’s ex wife, liked that a lot more.
    3. The issue with the Chinese must be provoked by an act by the US President and a mine blowing up a Chinese ship which the US denies. The mining of…[Read more]

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