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Which Pitch?

Which Pitch?

 

 In the Australian Season One, one of the lifeforms tagged, ‘The Beast’ is captured and interrogated. The lifeform has not spoken up until this point. At the climax of the interview, the interrogator fast-fires a series of questions, ‘Where do you come from?’ ‘What do you want?’ Finally, ‘Who sent you?’  The first words we […]

Sentient USA review Draft 3

Sentient USA review Draft 3

 

 Begin your review  Welcome to Joseph DiFrancesco’s Philadephia, USA Pilot script review.  This is the first of the reviews for the global team including Australia.  Click on the Pilot script to the left to view. See the original work and all prior reviews by the HOD here to track the work’s progress so far.  Please […]

Poll

Poll

 

 

What do they want?

What do they want?

 

 And why are they here? The survivors of Day One will spend most of Season One NOT knowing what has happened. They will presume: Humanity has been subject to genocide The enemy now wears us like a suit We have been colonised Our new masters intend to complete the job of wiping us out OR worse […]

Sentient - Pilot update - May 20th 2015

Sentient – Pilot update – May 20th 2015

 

 The Season One page lists each advance of the script. The latest update to the pilot went up May 20th and features significant changes which are important to your understanding of the story.  The Teaser and Act One Time starved? Here’s a summary.  Within the first nine pages we; Intro the hero, Lt. Commander Michael Dowd Preview a […]

Sentient - The conflict model

Sentient – The conflict model

 

 The Sentient Pilot The Australian franchise of the Sentient story features Royal Australian Navy diver, Lieutenant Commander Michael Dowd, an Indigenous officer and our lead protagonist. Read the Sentient Pilot. Do you have an idea or enhancement that would improve the first six pages of the pilot? Log-in and add your idea to the comments section below. Your […]

Sentient - The why

Sentient – The why

 

 In this post The tribe has spoken What’s next? Why Sentient? First time for you? Graphic designer wanted for site redesign Next post – preview Your slice of the pie New poll – Crowd funding mythology – Bust this  The tribe has spoken You voted to shift to Sentient. February – March will see the publishing […]

Sentient

Sentient

 

  Your vote on the Change-up poll revealed a desire for a simpler story. We’ve heard you and acted. Presence has created a new working title. We’ve focused on the sci-fi story and employed a Walking dead model. We will create a new site dedicated to the new franchise and will bring across the development community. The leaderboard and entitled […]

The Change-Up

 

 This post proposes the biggest change in direction in the history of the Journey project. It can empower the global team and get the project into production in 2015. Some of you won’t like it. Development so far Four months after publishing the first of the series bible posts, we’re still answering questions on the basics of […]

Series Bible (Part Six) - Two streams

Series Bible (Part Six) – Two streams

 

 The series bible reveals the arc of the entire story. Parts one through five introduced the major players and big picture.  Part six explores the pitch and the two streams of story that flow from the inciting incident.  In this post Development so far Keeping it simple Two streams of story The sponsorship model Development so far Skip […]

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